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Re: Music
You really can think and define music in two different ways. Because there's two sides of music; the logical side and then the emotional, metaphoric side. On one hand, music ...
Jul 30, 2012 -
Re: Hi everyone!
Hello, Dana! Welcome to the magical place I call YWS. That's really awesome that you have seven stories you're working on, and that some of them aren't even in english. ...
Apr 21, 2012 -
Re: NaPoWriMo (Poetry) Workshop! (22nd April)
I can do it for the first session. :D
Apr 21, 2012 -
Re: Hi, the name's Ikerot.
Hi Ikerot! I think the design is really cool, and I have no idea how you do it (I'm slightly hopeless at computers, except for PowerPoint.) Anyway, I am Picklesole ...
Apr 21, 2012 -
Re: A Beating Thing
Before you read it (or after) , just know that this is a mother talking about her newborn daughter. The rest you can figure out, sooo enjoy! :D Since when ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Pieces of Your Heart
So I decided to make this from a guy's point of view...not really sure why other than if it was in a woman's perspective the male would sound very feminine. ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Only For a Minute
Hey... I will admit, I had to read the first stanza a couple times because of the nonsensical second line but it makes sense after you read the rest of ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: The secrets of Death
This was really interesting! It takes a very different perspective on death than I would have thought of. It flowed well too. The only thing I would revise is capitilizing ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Wrapped Up
Awwww thanks!! :)
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Wrapped Up
Why has life decided To take hold of me now To whirl me in and out Of things I can't say Goodbye to Or why do I avoid The uncomfortable ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: A Lifetime
Thanks for the comments! Yeah, I'll definately try to work with the flow of the whole things. Thanks for all the tips! :D
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Walls
Thanks for the nice comment! Actually you got it spot on, so kudos to you! :D Also, thanks for the tips, I'll think about how I can incorporate that in. ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: A Lifetime
Half of this probably doesn't make sense or flow so please bear with me and give me any tips!! Thanks a bunches! :D If a person calls out When no ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Walls
I'm very new at poetry, so if this is terrible please tell me! Any help is appreciated a lot! :) My walls are built, My armour unbreakable We can't relate, ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Reciprocated Love
Hello! Okay, first things first, this was super awesome, but there are a couple things I'd like to mention. 1) NAMES!!!! Where are they?? It was almost unnoticable until the ...
Jan 3, 2012
