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Thanks! Anybody else reading this, feel free to crit. I can't decide whether or not I want to continue this storyline.

Yeah, Aedomir pointed out those spelling errors and such, so I'll just go on what's left. Perhaps you should make it a little clearer in these first entries why this ...

Pretty good, it kept my attention, even though I'm not overly fond of this genre! Okay, because the quote thing is far beyond me, I'll just use copy and paste! ...

No offense intended, none whatsoever, but I happen to like this rather more than the first part. this tastes a little less of "I wonder if I could mirror Tolkein" ...

Well, I'm Jewish, so I checked this out hoping it'd be a WWII story. I'm into those, no matter how depressed they make me. Something about the tone of this ...

It was certainly refreshing to finally hear something historically correct about the Roma people! I was getting sick of "and thhe widked gypsies stole his soul" kind of stuff. I ...

The cloaked woman hurried through the dark streets, bent protectively over the basket in her arms. A tall man strode swiftly beside her, his own footsteps muffled by the cloth ...

Uh, cool prologue! I'm not sure what the thing with the magicians is about, but then again, prologues are for leaving questions so that you read more to get answers! ...

Wait. She's a vampire, no? So how can she possibly look in the mirrror?! I was under the impression that in folklore, it's common knowledge that one of the most ...

I know how you feel, sort of. Maybe not. But at least I can -what was that word?- oh yeah, empathize. My cousin's about your age, and he's what the ...

Just though I'd say that you lead an interesting life over there. I happen to have three dogs and zero cats, and they're all spoiled. But I still wish we ...

Hey, don't feel bad! This was really good ^_^. Yeah, it could use some editing, but then, what couldn't? Aside from Ptolemy's Gate, I mean. Okay, so first, go through ...

I have to say, MC daydreams just like me. I make up these three second scenarios, all the time. Strangely, though, they usually take place in third person. Yeah. I'm ...

You know, I loved the book. I have a mild obsession with anything to do with psychology or "abnormalities" of the mind, and I've been into autism, retardation (nowhere near ...

I've been addicted to Dave Barry since I found his column in a Sunday paper (syndicated humor) and ever since, I've devoured his writing. Let me tell you, it could ...