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Re: A Beginning....one of many
Drip. Drip. Drop-drip. She had never thought of water torture as actually effective, but this was starting to drive her nuts. Drip. The bars of the cell were clammy to ...
Sep 18, 2006 -
Re: Son and Slave of Kings
I really like this poem. Knowing this character and his storyline adds a neat element to reading it. The only thing I would add would be a rhyming line at ...
Sep 16, 2006 -
Re: Hide
Very descriptive. Love it. I myself tend to write dark stuff without thinking about it--and I'm a 'class clown'.
Sep 16, 2006 -
Re: Broken
A force to break My heart in two A blade to cut A bleeding organ Into shreds of nothingness I cannot breathe I cannot think What is this hurt, this ...
Sep 15, 2006 -
Re: A Snippet of Thought
Dreams of sunlight Dreams of joy Blending into Starry moments Breathing out And breathing in The world is ever, Ever turning On this water-world we spin
Sep 15, 2006 -
Re: Happy Birthday! Or not...
Happy birthday, you dear old sot You arbiter of conning, you father of rot You belong in an asylum (I wonder where I'll find one?) With all the other raving ...
Sep 15, 2006 -
Re: Rhyme!
Rhyme rhymes with time And thyme And 'Go out to dine' You can cut down a pine Or say that you're fine Or, rather marvelously, wonderfully divine You can look ...
Sep 15, 2006 -
Re: A Softer Sort of Darkness
Falling Swallowed by Nothing and yet Somehow I feel a Sense of belonging, that Permeates me until I Breathe a softer sort of darkness
Sep 15, 2006 -
Re: A Softer Sort of Darkness
Falling Swallowed by Nothing and yet Somehow I feel a sense of belonging, that Permeates me until I breathe a softer sort of darkness
Sep 14, 2006 -
Re: "On being a Vulcan", or, "A Lyrical Treatise
Killing emotion That human condition Dragging our consciousness into the dust While logic and reason The clearminded decision Are cast by the wayside to molder and rust
Sep 14, 2006 -
Re: "Hi, my name is...." now fill in the blank!
Introduce myself, huh? Ok, then. I'm a freshie who loves to read and write. I'll post some poems here, soon...it's what I do in class when I'm bored. Found out ...
Sep 10, 2006 -
Re: Wordmaker
I really like it! A good description of authors!
Sep 10, 2006
