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PhoenixLaFay

  • Short Story » Narrative, Supernatural Re: My Own Personal Hell

    Okay first of all very intriguing story! Many of the things I am going to say are simply suggestions, not rules you have to live by. 1. This was probably ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Taken by Surprise

    Great story! Also this is my first review so sorry about the disorganization. 1. "This was the first time in so long Mr. Holac cried"- I am wondering about "Mr. ...

    Oct 11, 2016


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)