PhoenixBishop

Chapter 3 Charms Ok I'm currently in the revising stage. This will probably be my last chapter submitted to YWS. Because the next chapter follows the life of another character. ...

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In order to understand this you must understand Veronica. There is much more to her then meets the eye. All of this is really her overacting if you will. I ...

Kyle~ Kyle released Pollux. "Pollux, get the others out of here. I'm going to do that overload." "Overload, are you crazy. That technique was given to you as a last ...

For naruto arena one of the best teams in the beginning is Ino,Haku, and rock lee.

Drake~ Of all the people to get paired with it had to be Melony. Well he thought at least she was useful. She had four Zodiacs busy. Three were missing ...

Ok, you won't be the casuality. I have decided that besides cancer their must be anther death. I have picked already although I'm waitng for some advice. Two people will ...

Quin lead her team into the forest. She had them walk in a defensive position at all times, so that if they were atacked. She had them empty their packs ...

Soon I'm going to have to kill off some charters. I believe it will be Cancer and if Kitty15 doesn't get on soon Lybra will have to die in the ...

Kyle~ "I was six years old when the super soldier program began. There were several different titles back then. My older sister was part of the Olympian project. I was ...

I have to disagree. Some of the names are just plain ridicules. Besides that small problem I liked it. A very intersting idea with the new village, and a ninja ...

My only complaint is the last and first pargraph. It is true repetition is good for poetry, but I think this is just too much repetition. For a second I ...

Wish granted, but it was stolen and now the police are at your door. I wish I had superpowers.

This was really good. I liked how he didn't show, but told what happened. My inly real comment is the fact that you didn't captilize your I's in a few ...

In honor of today I decided to put up a friday the 13th storybook. Plot- Guests are invited to a haunted house. The owner says who ever can spend 24 ...