PhoenixBishop

Chad~ I decided to go ask Maria to the dance. I had to go for a swim first to calm my nerves. I dove into the water and pushed myself ...

So you have wished it. Now it is done

This was much better and for that reason I have little to say. Mention them all wearing black in the first paragraph instead of putting it in parenthesis in the ...

You may start now. Still allowing new members to join.

You know the drill post questions, concerns , and plot ideas hear.

Kyle~ Adrianna was still questioning Drake when we got into town to get supplies. We entered a store and began to place in the cart various items we would need. ...

Name- Xander Age 17 Gender- Male House-Yang Standing-Bishop Powers Bends light to create spacial illusions. Healer. Can place upon people a stupor of happiness that he usually uses to distract ...

Plot- There are two houses of power that rule the world of Chi. The house of Yin and the House of Yang. These two houses have been at war for ...

I think you should pm phantom, she's usaly really good about posting. I thik she might have forgot.

Chad~ I couldn't wait for the dance. Dances were probably the best way to meet new people. It's where you were constantly surrounded by people, and at this dance I ...

*Who are you theinthein*

Yeah my first requested review is done. This is fun Keep them coming.

Bone watched Almond’s shoes disappear through the window, and started climbing. She hoisted herself through the opening and looked around the room. It was completely silent, except for the sound ...

Although it says chapter 4. It is not necessary to have read the previous chapters, because it's a whole other character. Title: Phoenix Saga Death becomes him Genre: Fantasy Fiction ...

I'd like to up my review count and increase my editing skills. I want to stress that if it's fantasy or science fiction you will get a much more detailed ...