PhoenixBishop

For a fourth time, light is seen. The sparks, the seeds of the light, have burst into a steady glow….. a small, frail, flickering thing… but spirited, all the same, ...

6/10 It's a bit vague which makes me want to read on. When the phone rang at three o’clock in the morning, Eli Miller knew something was wrong. He had ...

A train going off course

If you pick a accomplished editor then they know what their talking about. They've been in the industry for however many years and they know what sells and what doesn't. ...

I believe strongly in Tabla Rasa the theory that everyone is born completely neutral and events in their life lead to their future actions. You know your characters history translate ...

Ok so I came up with two character a long time ago, and yet I don't know what to do with them. I came up with multiple ideas but all ...

I start stories by charters first. Jenica and Kyle were two people I came up with a long time ago and I've put them in various stories to see what ...

Too often when reading a story there is a love triangle. Usually the best friend and some brooding individual that sweeps the girl off their feet. Or a player guy ...

I'll be your reviewer for today. He should know me better; give me better credit then that. I guess I’m just another one of his girl’s, one that he can ...

Moonlight was shining up ahead where another alley crossed. You used Moonlight and shining before come up with a different way of describing the Moon light. For example -A small ...

*Hello everyone Graduation is over and things have settled down. So I can take this time to help make it to the end.* Seth~ I became board with the whole ...

It sounds good but I would suggest changing the main characters name. It reminds me too much of twilight, plus the name is old fashioned and is barley use now ...

Chad~ Maria called to me and I turned to look at her, an image coming to my head. I remembered her laying in my arms under a tree, and I ...

Chad~ We decided not to press charges against Alex. So he would be back at school. Tracey had gotten stitches in her head, and I got stitched across my jaw. ...

Seth~ "Hey, Adam, I just heard something you might want to know about Nick and Shannon. You're friend as you call him slept with Shannon. "You're a rotten liar, why ...