PhoenixBishop

7/10 I love X-Men and I love The Phoenix, but it lost points for the ridicules plot and killing off too many people. Lion King

As much as we want to believe that our writing will speak for itself and attract the needed readers to become a bestseller, this won't happen if you don't have ...

It's Amon reviewing before I announce the winners. I like your back story to why how vampires were created. I do think that the characters at this point don't have ...

Hey I'm Amon and I'm here to review your piece before I announce the winners. First I would like to compliment you on your voice. The characters voice is very ...

Travis~ I woke up went to the admissions office so I could persuade the receptionist allow me to get my sister in, but she said I didn't have enough in ...

sorry I've been gone so long I'm on vacation until late Tuesday and couldn't get on the computer. Can somebody please work my character into the story so I have ...

I like the second option better because it has more potential. If you go with the first, I suggest you tell it from the perspective of a human. Probaly a ...

I'm going through all my entries and giving my reviews before I reveal the winners. I read this one first. This was really god. I liked how you switched it. ...

Now that the Contest has ended I'm going through all the entries and giving them a review. The trees whispered to each other, rocking back and forth in the icy ...

Rosey gave some great advice listen to her. On top of that I suggest you find a picture of you're character. If you have artistic skills, draw the picture. If ...

On my own time Gone by Michael Grant It had bad writing, the characters were flat and acted out of their age. The prose was repetetive, and the dialogue was ...

Travis~ I walked to my room in a daze. Right now my sister was scared and alone. I had to get her here. I decided I would talk to the ...

Ok one of my main characters name is Demetre. This is an untraditonal way of spelling Demitri. So I'm wondering which one you guys like better. Also I need a ...

Ok lets add some more stuff to this profile of mine. My real name is Ian. I have one brother that's 26 and he's in law school. Of course I've ...

This isn't anything in particuler. Just a short story I wrote for my friend. They were dead. That fact was never questioned. How they died, on the other hand, became ...