PhoenixBishop

1.The first idea is loosely based off of my senior year of high school. In which five students fight to gain the spot of valedictorian so they can get into ...

Yes it seems that the other one is dying. Anyway I was thinking since Alex died maybe Seth can tweak it so Matt is arrested for murder or man slaughter. ...

Done :D

Phoenix here with a review Her hair was one half shimmering summer and one half whispering autumn What exactly does that mean. I'm assuming it means her hair is redish ...

11th draft Rosey? You must be one of those types that is never completely happy what she writes. Anyway Rosey is right, you need to develop their past. Also you ...

Done :D Next please

Hey, Phoenix here to do your review Any and all suspensions pending expulsion were accompanied with pages of information, most of it useless hearsay. Some accusations, a handful of rumors… ...

What does NPC mean? If it means a community character then I'm fine with that. I was never that good at the evil plotting thing. I

Chad~ With Chad apprehended we stood outside as the police questioned us. I never understood why ambulances gave people blankets after a traumatic experience, but now I understood. I felt ...

So is that what we're doing for now , going swimming?

Hey I'm Phoenix here to give you a review. The summer holidays in New York were over and the new school year has just begun. It was another rainy day ...

Lily~ I was getting a lot of attention which pleased me. First a girl named Bethany introduced herself, then Mary, then Jackie. They all seemed nice enough. I could make ...

Sorry if I took you thunder rider but I was bored Left~ Desmond- Ridersodamar Mary-Laurne2010 Lily-PhoenixBishop Jackie-Pudin-junidif Bethany- WhiteTiger93 Iclisa- Foxfire Corneila-Foxfire Shane- Bolt

Travis~Right I was called to the left, and was latter disappointed when Mary was called to the left. And even further disappointed when Lily was called to the left I ...

Honestly that sounds like a whole lot more work. People seem to think that self publishing is easier. It's not, as you said you have no real way to promote ...