PhoenixBishop

Phoenix here to review. She brushed her long, silky blonde hair out of her eyes and bent down To much description on the hair. Long and blonde is enough. Two ...

Chad~ *Anything is fine with me a Flood sounds cool.* I was happy that Matt was out now. May was still hugging him. Maria came over to me and without ...

Player Profile Name: Ben Lawson Age: 17 Grade: 12 Appearance: Messy black hair, 5'9, dark eyes. Goes to a prep school so generally wears a button down shirt, tie and ...

Phoenix here again. I hope I'm not annoying you. :elephant: I lengthened my steps, hoping to escape these painful words. I knew that child; I had babysat her many a ...

Phoenix again. For part three :elephant: A while later I finished . Before this and after the I began say I told Death everything that had happened in the Cave. ...

Phoenix her to do the next review. I see there is only one review to this so I'll nit pick unlike last time. After the meeting was over I went ...

Hey Phoenix here. I noticed that the 3rd and fourth part to this haven't been commented on so I decided to come and read the first parts to give a ...

Each drop creates harmony with our heart beating. hearts unless you meant there so in love their hearts beat as one. If that be the case you should probably put ...

Hello Phoenix here to review. So the story has a nice feel to it, and I believe you used a point of view that works for the situation. So here ...

That will help with the actual querying process, and you can find a agent by typing in genre and other such things to find the perfect agent for your type ...

To Krupp's I'd say a 9/10. Haven't read anything on Norse Mythology. Saying that I can tell it's done very originally. To Layla I'd say 6/10 Here is mine. A ...

If you would could I please get... Character, Animal or Object: A Phoenix Text: Can a Eagle do this. Extras:

The graphics were amazing of course. I saw it in 3D. I didn't like the plot, not because it was cliche, but because it was unrealistic. I found the pertrail ...

We should have a natural disaster to kick some life into this. Like a tornado or a hurricane or a flood.

I believe it's night time if no one has anything planed for tonight then we can skip to the morning and your release. Next person just has to go "The ...