PhoenixBishop

*Just noting, Yang is a guy. Yang is the masculine part of Yin & Yang. I suppose my avatar may have confused you Jagged.* Yang~ I rode my Pilo swine ...

Yang~ I called my sister and she swooped down on her Noctowl. She jumped off and looked at me with a smile. "You ready to battle," she asked. "I want ...

Yang Why didn't I have a Pokemon that could fly. Of course the reason why was because Yin had a Noctowl that would fly me everywhere when I was with ...

Name: Yang Gender: Male Hometown: Sinnoh Jubilife city Description: 5'7, black hair, White shirt with a black vest and pants with black and white legs. History: He and his sister ...

8/10 Zelda if I'm not mistaken.

Chad~ (Tries to bring it back again) We looked around and Seth was no where in sight. Nick Matt and myself ran upstairs to find him. We couldn't let him ...

Welcome to YWS. I'm Phoenix here to review your story. Although since it's a prologue I assume this is to a working Novel. In which case this should be in ...

Banned for chanting USA! an odd number of times. Even numbers are so much better.

1. The Grapes of Wrath. ( I don't like Steinbeck in general, but this was slow eye stabbing. 2. Hush Hush (Think twilight with a stupider girl more boring boy ...

Down for edits Thank you all that have helped

#1 - Holiday Destination: Canada #2 - House: Several (Villas/Flats) #3 - Beach #4 - Coconut chocolate #5 - Dream job #6 - Lay-in, #7 - Shower #8 - Fox ...

I must say this is extremely cool. I have nothing to put on it though, which saddens me. The only Novel I ever put on here was the first chapters ...

Milk.

Well, added to this list should be telepathy. I mean, the standard idea is, guy (never girl, it seems) I'm not sure where you got this idea, almost all the ...

I think it can work if you have the personality for it. Some people are good at working with others and bouncing ideas off each other. I personally would never ...