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Universe 911B This will be one of the first universes that comes into play. In this Universe the 9/11 attack did not occur thus delaying the US entrance into the ...

ʇıןds| split So this is where we discuss. If you have any questions post them here. This will also be where other universes will be compiled. When it comes to ...

Name: Sylvester Cutler Alias: Decay ]Age: 77 Gender: Male Appearance: A frail old man that gets around in a wheel chair. He had thinning white hair and decayed teeth. He ...

split| ʇıןds accepting Everyday humans make choices. It is believed that for every choice made a new universe is create to reflect that choice. Say you choose to drink coffee ...

Alex| Agent I wasn't sure why we were having a meeting I just knew it was very important because the room was packed with agents I've never seen in my ...

Phoenix lands for a review. In air... I don't think the ellipses are needed the formation of putting the two words alone make the break. Tell of a vision, Me, ...

I have a request. It is in the fantasy section but this section has no fantasy elements that are obvious. If you didn't see it in the fantasy section you ...

Logan- Hallway- 4:00pm The last twenty-four hours of my life had been extremely tiring. With Isaac back I hoped things would come back to normal but with Roan gone normality ...

I would very much like to request a review. This is the first chapter of my book. Thanks in advanced.

Phoenix lands for a review. She held the hand of a small child, looking back to make sure the girl was keeping up. Wait if she was holding her hand, ...

Phoenix lands for a review She felt soft quakes that plagued the cold rock floor beneath her feet. This sounds awkward I suggest replacing the plagued. The pulse made her ...

I pick a random page in the middle of the book because I know that the first line/page probably went through the most work until it was perfect. That being ...

Phoenix lands to review I like it but I think the rhyme scheme is a bit overly simplistic. It seems like you just wanted it to rhyme. Like the land ...

Phoenix lands for a review. Well there is not much I can say that hasn't already been said. All I can say is that you're amazing at imagery a pattern ...

Phoenix lands for a review Whether we meant well matters not After all, who would believe us? This a bit confusing. Meant well at doing what? And who is there ...