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Dear Bryce :), Your story was very good I really enjoyed it. I like your story line a lot and how you wrote your story (in first person). I did ...

Hey Cole :], First of all, i really enjoyed your story and how you wrote it. I like how you plotted your story by having the family be rich then ...

Hi Dylan, Good story first of all, I really like how you spaced out your story (that's the problem with me, it's a little hard for me to do that). ...