Phantomofthebasket

Haha, I'm back... Like, after a year... And I finally posted some things! GO ME!

Hello once again! =D I really, really liked this. Its way different than anything I've ever read. It was confusing, yet it made sense, if that makes any sense whatsoever. ...

Wow. This was a LONG one-shot, but I really liked it. It was funny and it gave a different view on what a possible Hell could be like, since most ...

Hmm, I really liked it. Its very different, which is really nice. To improve it, you probably could've used a bit more detail. Like, when the boy asked his mom ...

Hey, good piece! It is a tad confusing, but I'm assuming you're going to keep going with it, to explain more in later chapters? If not, you may want to ...

Yo. This was written for a class assignment. Sorry that it’s so long, but once you finish the piece, you’ll understand why I couldn’t cut it in half or anything. ...

Hm. I liked it. Nice job with the circle, as, obviously many-a people have already said. It's especially good for something under 500 words. I can never write under that; ...

Hmm. I liked it. It was very interesting to read and I'm curious as to see what happens next. The only problem, that I saw? Watch your "i". You keep ...

Hmm... this WAS really good. Though I was confused on it. But I think I got it. Cam and Mike are one person, but two different personalities, right? If so, ...

Hmm... this WAS really good. Though I was confused on it. But I think I got it. Cam and Mike are one person, but two different personalities, right? If so, ...

Good job. =D But... First: Edward's lips. They're... too big for a guy. Too... puffy. Second: I don't know if this was done on purpose, but you can't really see ...

Oh, wow. AMAZINg drawing. The shading is BRILLIANT. I think the only problem with it is maybe the face and right hand. With all of the brilliant shading and creases ...

Oh. My. God. Wow. The detail is absolutely AMAZING! This looks as if it was drawn by a professional, no joke. And you did this with only a pen? No ...

Wow. Nice piece. The child was a bit... too intelligent for being a five year old. He was talking as if he were an adult. What you could do to ...

I really liked this. I liked at how vague you were to WHY he was in jail, yet I loved the descriptions you gave. I really like the ending, it ...