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Re: Sapphire - elf story (temp. title-still open to suggestions)
Very good, the description of main characters eyes was short but very captivating. I spotted a couple mistakes as far as tense goes, despite the writing seems to be past ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Sapphire - elf story (temp. title-still open to suggestions)
Very good, the description of main characters eyes was short but very captivating. I spotted a couple mistakes as far as tense goes, despite the writing seems to be past ...
Jul 15, 2008
