Phaix

um...wow... I really enjoyed reading this! You are seriously talented and you must never give it up. Although it lost some pace in the middle I was really happy that ...

hey bluewaterlilly! how are you today? Firstly, I'd like to say that you really have something good going on here! You obviously love your story and genre, and the passion ...

hey aspiring.author! firstly...WOW! this was really, really good. You obviously have a natural talent for writing, and you have a brilliant grasp on drama. Your writing style and descriptions of ...

Hi! Phaix here :) Firstly, I really like your writing style. It's nice to read something short, snappy, and straight to the point. I can hear a cynical voice throughout ...

hi shadowlight! You obviously have a clear view of the scene in your mind, and I really felt your passion for describing it. Although not perfect, it certainly was beautiful ...

hey shadowlight! thank you so much for taking the time to review :D Natsura is Mileneth's 'red destrier' I've been thinking i need to clean that up anyways, i kind ...

hey! thanks for the review! the second point you picked up on was supposed to be a thought, but i guess it wasnt too clear. ill clean that up! but ...

Waahhh hello YWS! I'm very excited to be here :D This is a short extract from the Prologue of my book. I won't give any explanation - for that you'll ...

I like this. I like this a lot. You really have a grasp for action and drama! I was totally gripped, well done :D (Logan isn't really dead right?!?!) One ...

Hey! Well done, this is really fantastic for your first go at writing. Your ideas are really individual, which is super important for getting noticed, so well done! The only ...