Phaix

hey! I see that you have many, many reviews already, but I think you deserve one more, even if its just to say how good this is! Really, I was ...

Morning Mira and Merry Christmas! Firstly I'd like to say that this was really lovely. You have a few pointers I think you could work on, but you have the ...

hey Ben Franks :) lovely to meet you and happy christmas eve! well firstly I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this piece - you are a very ...

hey! thanks for the reviews, sorry about the annoying typo's! I really appreciate it :D This is going through a complete re-write at the moment. I've realised that Darian initiating ...

Hey Rubric, nice going here, this is really really good. Once again I have to comment on your amazing writing style, you have serious talent. Dont ever stop writing! I ...

exerpt from chapter 1, written in a rush! This is the first time i've written in a long time and i'm a little apprehensive about the results. let me know ...

I like this, I like this very much. It needs a little polishing, but that is easily fixed. You write well and with real feeling, so I as the reader ...

Hey! I'm phaix, lovely to meet you. I really enjoyed this, i hope there's more to come! I really want to know more about the house and what adventures it ...

Oh my word, I loved this. It was so simple and beautiful, and it really made my heart speed up! The ending was absolutely perfect. The repetition of "you're cute" ...

Good morning! I'm going to jump straight in with my review, I hope you dont mind! They named her Rain Sinclair when she was born. It meant that she was ...

Hey :D You write beautifully! You have a rare natural talent that has left me jealous XD I love Strick, he's a great character. I imagine him all stoic and ...

Hey! I'm back! This second part is great, however I'm a bit disappointed that it wasn't longer! Why exactly did you split it into two sections? The first part gave ...

Hey, this is really great stuff :) I read all the other comments, they seem to have covered quite a lot. However i did pick up on one mistake: "Tomorrow: ...

Hey AAAM! How are you today? I'm not going to cover any gramma or the such like, that seems to have been addressed already. Instead I'll gush for a bit ...

Edited 29/06/2010 Thanks for all the helpful reviews :) I want to develop this eventually so that it's part of a larger piece; no matter how much I edit it ...