Phaix

Okay, I have to say to start off, that I really enjoyed this. I usually avoid longer pieces, but this was no chore at all to read and I felt ...

ooooo myyyy gooossshhhh This was wonderful, I really enjoyed it. Very, very good. You are an excellent writer, and this is shaping up to be an excellent story. (That is, ...

Hi! This is very good, you are have a natural talent and your writing feels completely effortless. I love it. This is a great opening to a story - it ...

I LOVE this story :) I actually laughed out loud when Colin got his magic on and blasted the bully! It's very easy to read and the story is fun ...

this is lovely :) do you have a deviant art account?

This was good, I enjoyed it :) I am always a fan of kick-ass vamps, and Kenyon definitely seems like the kick-ass type. There is, however, a few problems with ...

wahh! creepy?! dont tell me Colin gets jumped by scaley robot guy?! the writing... Overall, you're really quite good :) I think you just need a little more practice! Firstly, ...

hey hey!! welcome to yws :) I'll check out your work if you dont mind too much!! have a good day! Phaix :)

hey! I noticed that you are currently review-less. now thats just not fair! Your idea for the forest spirits is lovely, I have similar ideas in my more recent work. ...

Hey! I'm Phaix and I'm here for a quick review :) So let's get down to business. Mourning doves filled the dark skies with its cries and alighted on the ...

50,025! in 21days! I stopped once i'd passed the 50,000 word line, which was a bit stupid really. But i'd NEVER written more than 10,000 words of one piece before, ...

Hey, I noticed that you didn't have any reviews for your piece, so here I am! Let's get started. It is so dark; like an event horizon where nothing could ...

Hi! I'm here to go through chapter 3 :) A deep slash on his chest oozed crimson blood. The red liquid was spattered everywhere, most of it theirs. You dont ...

heyy! I'm phaix, and I'm here to help you edit your piece. Firstly, I really enjoyed reading this! You have a lovely stong base with your writing and I am ...

hii! I'm Phaix, and I was lucky enough to stumble across this piece whilst nosying about on the site. This is really, really good! Your writing is exceptional, I am ...