Peyton

This was a funny and well-written poem! The only comment I have is that the last stanza should probably be a quatrain, just like the rest of the piece. Although, ...

Hi, June and Forever Threnody! Thank you both for the welcome (June, that was exceptionally thorough! Thanks!). I normally write action/adventure. I don't do poetry - sadly, I can't rhyme ...

Yep. I'm new. :) This site was recommended to me and it looks like a really nice writer's forum. I need to work on my writing skills, and this looks ...