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Re: music love hart
Hey, Pervy here. I just want you to know that this is really nice. You really managed well on the lines, and the proportions of the notes were excellent. It's ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Soulless [Main Character]
Hey everyone! This is the "raw" idea for the main character of my novel "Soulless". Hope you like it, check out the novel if interested ;) (feel free to rip ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: We never were
Hey, Pervy here. I really liked this story, i'm quite sure almost everyone have had a similar situation at a certain moment of their lives (or yet to experience it?). ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: The Break-in
Hey, it's Pervy here. This story was good and you described the events well. It just left me wondering that the average man would beat the s*it out of you ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Homemade Devil
Hey, Pervy here. Onto the review: You might be using the word "you" too much in the first and last part. It sounds pretty blunt when you read it out ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Soulless [Chapter 1, review please]
[Supposed to be in the novels section, sorry.] Could someone please tell me their opinion about it, so I can decide on continuing it or not =) The concept of ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Love Birds
Hey! These are really cool! You really have a unique style of drawing, and it's working really splendedly for you. Yes, they are definately in love :3, they seem to ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: A short story: Bartolome
Hey, Pervy here. I noticed at the first glimpse that the work is full of spelling errors, but don't fret! Start each word in a title with a capital letter. ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Serenity [Main Character For Novel]
Hey, thanks for the comments! It's not that she doesn't have round features, but her shirt is raggy. She's a witch so that's the explanation for the hair ^^.I suppose ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Serenity [Main Character For Novel]
So this is the sketch of the main character for my upcoming novel, Serenity's Lore. She's the apprentice of a wizard, incase you're interested.[This is the first time ever that ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Casting shadows
Hey, Pervy here. This poem was good, first I tried guessing a bat, until I continued reading and found out that it's white, has hollow eyes and circles the moon. ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Passing Time
Hey, Pervy here. I have to admit that poems aren't really my expertise, but I can tell apart the "good" and "bad" ones. This one falls into the category of ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Nobles and Beggars *Part 1*
Hey there lad, Pervy here. I enjoyed reading this, you described the characters and their actions splendedly, and I got a good idea of the scenery as well. Onto the ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Darkness In London [Chapter 1, Edited]
This is the first chapter to another random 5am story, enjoy! A Bargain With The Devil [1879, London] Aelfric Ellwood, a 5 foot chubby man with a handlebar moustache, puffed ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: My Heart.
Happy that y'all like it. Yeah she was really happy ^^ (I added a small text to it in addition). Apparently my thumbs bend like that? XD Yeah I'm weird. ...
Jan 8, 2011
