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Re: An Alien World- Chapter 5
Chapter5: Jack They brought her in with a bag over her head. Her legs and arms were bound. Her dress was short. It looked like it was made from a ...
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Re: Caste- Chapter 2
Chapter 2- Mission Accomplished: Kale The Ashen girl went unconscious. I took her from Aeron and put her in the back seat. Her feet were bare, and her heels were ...
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Re: Caste- Chapter 1
Chapter 1- The Beach: Iris “Yes. No! Not the scarves, they’re simply ghastly! Yes use the bangles, no the gold ones. The… the gold ones you idiot, can you understand ...
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Re: An Alien World- Chapter 4
Chapter 4: Nadira “Oh Mother. I wish I could speak to you. What should I do? What can any of us do?” I sighed and hugged my legs close to ...
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Re: An Alien World- Chapter 3
Chapter 3: Jack “We’ll stay here. Soldier! Set up the camp. I want armed guards watching the entrance. No one comes in or out of this place without my expressed ...
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Re: An Alien World- Chapter 2
Chapter2: Nadira My hair trailed out behind me as I ran. The red grass glided beneath my bare feet and branches caught my face, but I didn’t care. The tears ...
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Re: An Alien World- Chapter 1
Chapter1: Jack “Hurry up and shift that crate! Come on soldiers, your working like a bunch of sissy’s!” The commander yelled at the couple of hundred men who were unloading ...
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Re: The Reckoning- Prologue
Thanks a lot for the review! I am glad you liked the idea and will try to fix some things up asap ;P
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Re: The Reckoning- Chapter 3
CHAPTER 3- BLOODY LULLABY Everything was upside down. My head hovered above the floor in my bathroom as I hung from the shower curtain. My long red hair hung miserably ...
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Re: The Reckoning- Chapter 2
Thanks again Stella! I'll be sure to fix those wee things up ;P And nps I'll keep you posted. And yes, Dean :) Although I must admit Sam is favourable ...
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Re: chapter 1 of Calisan and the Lantern of Deceit
The moon was shining as bright as its sister, the sun, had just a few hours before. Calisan moved up a little bit closer to the antiquated oak tree. He ...
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Re: The Atlantian Children – The Light of Zakious
I am really liking this! There is a good plot structure and the layout thing I get, so don't worry about that. This is after all a young writers website ...
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Re: The Next Arthur- Act One
Act One Scene starts with continual music from previous, displaying scenes of Camelot, its peasant people in their everyday lives, the rivers and streams and forests outside. Then as the ...
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Re: The Next Arthur (for screen)- Prologue
Prologue A young woman with hair blacker than night and eyes greener than grass sits upon a large stone chair on a pedestal in a dark earthy tomb, a cave ...
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Re: Easy way to write a successful series
the trilogy was just an example to explain the string thing. Its any series of books. But if I used a seven series example for this you would be bored ...
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