Perra

Well, that just will not do. *Edits Wikipedia article* Ooh, I'm such a vandal! Hurrah, Cpt. Smurf! I really can't say why people love the books so much. Maybe it's ...

I am about a fifth or sixth of the way through Dune by Frank Herbert. It's high time I read this, considering I'm named after Lady Jessica and understand most ...

Thanks for reading Perra!!! I really apreciate it!!! You're welcome. ^-^ And I forgot to mention this: At the end of this, how did Absynthe get out of her cage? ...

While this is an intesresting piece, it needs some work. Nothing a little help, editing, and practice can't fix, though. In the beginnig of the story you tell us what ...

Mrow! *huggles* That was wonderful. I absolutely love how the narrator replacing the angel was written. The whole thing was quite emotional. Grammar Nit Picks: The fact I'm not really ...

This is an interesting beginning. I like how it starts off with a conversation. It directs the my attention and gave me information without out-right telling. It also enticed my ...

They come to schools with little or no experience with magic. Perhaps "They enter magic school" instead of "They come to schools"? Because "come to schools" isn't a good phrase. ...

Perhaps Resources could be advertised around the site? Like we have the random user box, we could have a box advertising Resources. A sort of promotional campaign? The contents of ...

I haven't been in many waiting rooms. Mainly just the dentist's and orthodontist's offices. I've also been in a physical therapy waiting room and the waiting room of what I ...

Heheh. I rarely notice the buttons right of the "Writing" one. If you move it between the "YWS" button and "Community" button, maybe people (or, at least, long-time users who ...

I think we later found out that the prompt was one of those sample/trial questions and didn't count towards/against our score. Hopefully they learned their lesson. Perhaps they made it ...

Teehee, awesome! My goal at the moment is quite simple and easy: to get two more reviews and, at long last, my third frakkin' star by tomorrow night. Shouldn't be ...

Aw, Suzi! You nearly made me cry! Although, it's mostly because I read "Bits and Pieces: Agatha" first and got to know her and her mind that way. If I ...

There are far too many contradictions and what does fit just seems too perfect, and is quite frankly the easy way out when we had no other answers. The Bible ...

You're welcome! ^-^ I like this new one. It gives us some great insight into Agatha's character. It transitions well from an innocent and well-intentioned request (at least, that what ...