Perra

*Hides behind migraine* It ain't my fault! I mean, innt! I mean...I mean...oh, never mind. *Goes to sulk* I hate migraines. :( Thanks! Aw, I understand! Migraines can be pretty ...

"My father paces the floor" gets you out of the "is" issue. But if you're determined to use "is", "My father's pacing the floor" is correct. You know that it's ...

Haha. Some state-exam we had to take junior year had a prompt that told us to write write a letter to the president/congressman/senator/government about things in the government we wanted ...

“You…” the man whispered. Blood sprayed on her face as he coughed. It rolled down her chin and onto the floor. It was in her mouth. She tried not to ...

A production assistant for Dr. Phil bailed out one of the girls just so Dr. Phil could do an episode on it. The production assistant also told reporters to back ...

But what I don't get is why gays feel compelled to 'flaunt' their pride. Maybe it's a balancing thing, one side of the scale has the majority saying negative things ...

I love these. Especially the second one. This is terrible, but I started laughing after this sentence: The four year difference was smaller in comparison to the blood that was ...

I enjoyed the beginning, such as her digging into the man's heart, but by the end it was...eh. Yes, "eh." Maybe my awesome scale is a bit off (which you ...

I lose! And also: According to this , we're free! :D

I know it's inevitable for these to go off on tangents, but it seemed like it was going too far, becoming more a debate about religion, God, and the Bible ...

I love this story. Poor Ezra just can't get a break. You're awesome for writing this. ^.^ I'm only critiquing Chapters/Part VI-VII because all the others have been done. By ...

Aw, poor Ezra! I love this story. As my proof, I was overly excited when Millie mentioned that Ezra needed a girl's name and, with gobs of enthusiasm and gushing, ...

Clearly defined rules, setting, and character requisites come to mind. Also make sure that it isn't a redundant storybook. In other words, that the new storybook isn't a repeat (or ...

I'm impressed. This is a good, well written story. In a short amount of time, you made me care (or at least curious) about the characters, gave enough info about ...

That's not all that's wrong with this sect. Many of the teenage boys are run out of the compounds so as to keep the competition for the young girls thin. ...