PerpetualBhridge

Ahahahaha, I usually don't go for parodies, but this was hilarious . It was absolutely fantastic, usually subtlety is more effective, but I think this style works for a Breaking ...

Hi! I really liked this beginning, just a few nitpicks: Guys flocking around her, best friend to everyone and butter wouldn’t melt looks. Guys flocking around her, best friend to ...

This was really beautiful, I think castlesinthesky ^^ got all the nitpicky stuff, so I'll do the easy part:I'll tell you how much I liked this. :) It really flowed, ...

But you wanna hear a secret, I only read it cause I love Hugh Laurie, just don't tell anyone. Haha, me too. I'm so sorry, but that's just the way ...

Very nice! So cute and so poetic, and so true! It's kinda simple, but complex, I really like the idea and the way it's written. Are we gonna get a ...

Thanks for the pm, that was fast! Running through the tangle was the boy I’d waiter for my whole life I'm sorry that I'm so nitpicky, but it's who I ...

Awesome, are you going to continue? pleeease continue. The descriptions are lovely and you set up a lot of questions, that I do think need to be answered...please? Just one ...

I would really like to read more of this, it's good. But I think you could set up the setting better and tell us the age and possibly a little ...

Hi! I'm in a good mood right now, so I think now's a good a time as any to tell you a little about myself: I love language, it's beautiful, ...

Hi Megan! I'm Megan too (no H, I know you can see that, but it seems like I have to tell everyone). I'm fourteen as well, and kinda new here. ...

Ooh, interesting.. "English Nerd," "Dork," and "Freak." I wear these with pride. Story of my life. Languages and Jane Austen, me too! I like the, well I can't really think ...

Hi! I'm new too, I thought I'd say hi, and I think Ava is a really pretty name. Also, you can't be saying that batman is better than spiderman. He ...

Awwww! I had to say it :) I think if you showed a little for of the characters' feelings through their movements, the effect would be better. Maybe put a ...

Thanks everyone! I'm likin' the nicknames, by the way. I like to write, well, everything. I write poetry, not great poetry, but I poetry nonetheless. I kind of write drama, ...

I really like that story, and I really liked your first line, captivating. I do think, however, that your first two paragraphs could be a little less, er, straight-forward: Have ...