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Re: God of the Underworld: Chapter 1: (revised)
When I woke up in the morning, I thought it was just another ordinary day. You know, wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, get picked on all day, and ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Nightshine - chapter 1 (revised)
I. NITPICKS "The first day of school." I said quietly to myself with a sense of dread . My name is Louis Nightshine. I'm your typical 13 year old eighth ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: What bands/artists are your favorite?
Feist Kate Nash Imogen Heap/Frou Frou Bitter:Sweet Nightmare of You Regina Spektor Ingrid Michaelson MIKA Norah Jones Corinne Bailey Rae Well, I like those because they sound nice? Lately I've ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: The Shiner
Pinata: Hahaa....thanks. Robin: That's a really interesting diagram. Thanks! Thanks for everything else, too. JFW: Very helpful. I didn't even realize my sentences were that long. You can tell I'm ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: The Humor of Sanctum
You have encountered Overbearing Mother which lunges at you with 9pm Curfew! Hahaha...makes me laugh.
May 3, 2008 -
Re: To Do with Music
Bright colours flash before my eyes; a thousand smells overwhelm my nose; vivid tastes assault my tongue; and the sounds – the sounds are like a million choirs; the chorus ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Character Names
I like normal names. I don't really get into the whole match the personality to the name or Japanese-inspired names. I just like normal (maybe older sounding names like Eleanor, ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: I'm here to Help
Hey there! Can I have a review for "The Shiner"? Thanks if you do!
May 1, 2008 -
Re: locked
I. NITPICKS “Eighteen, shouldn’t you be in school then? It’s Thursday night!” I replied. I’d always been a rule-abiding child and teenager. There wasn’t much to complain about when I ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Straw Dog
Review for a Review! I. NITPICKS The way his head slammed against the wall shook the two onlookers. It cracked loudly but he didn’t acknowledge the pain. That’s what scared ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: The Shiner
The hot summer day had turned us into popsicles - two frozen treats sitting side-by-side, excreting sticky perspiration in the way that only forgotten dreamsicles could. And, just like popsicles, ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Austrian Girl Sexually Abused for 24 years
We talked about that in Global Studies (though I knew about it because I read the thread yesterday). It's so sad. Apparently Fritzl is on suicide watch now:
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: vampire to the death... ch. 1
seems you added more. :) Sataru froze. Sentri found her neck... the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and her heart beat quickened.He surprised her by kissing ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Reflections, Chapter 1
I. NITPICKS I’m wasn't sure what the time was as I headed down the dark streets. It must have been late. Admittedly, I was a little drunk. That’s why I ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Nightshine - chapter 1
I. Showing vs. Telling THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL. I thought to myself with a sense of dread . My name is Louis Nightshine. I'm your typical 13 year old ...
Apr 29, 2008
