Periwinkle

I. NITPICKS “It’s okay Mom; I’m not afraid to die,” the boy whispered. The hum of the air conditioner accompanied the sound of his mother’s shifting around nervously. Better said ...

I. NITPICKS Oh God, why today of all days?!That damned Mary Rose had to drop in on the day I didn't want to see her the most. Eric Briggs and ...

Aestar: Thanks a lot for your review! I really don't mind waiting. Muteman: Thanks, too, I'm working on my word choice right now. I'm trying to make it much more ...

This one makes me laugh: You have encountered Cliche Bond Movie Villain which lunges at you with Cell-phone of Death! Well, really, who throws a cell phone? I mean, that ...

That's a bit bigoted and offensive. The Day of Silence was started by students in Virginia as a non-violent protest against intolerance, specifically the "name-calling, bullying and harassment -- in ...

Sure some guys see a bikini model as something erotic, but mostly it's there to show a girl what it looks like. Should we outlaw sock adds because they might ...

Commando, see my above point re: objectifying women. I think it's important if we're bringing bikini models into this. (I'm trying not to go off on my femmenerd rant here, ...

Commando, Read my last post before making stereotypes about women. We are just as prone to sexual addiction as men are. I hate to break it to you. Read my ...

I find it amuzing that you guys think porn is not very addicting. And do you know why its funny? Because you all are woman. Don't get me wrong! I ...

Just as some people who do drugs don't see any harm being done. If something can hurt a person, much less enough people to where a multitude of books and ...

Thanks everyone! I've completely edited now based on everyone's suggestions and JFW's nitpicks. Ashleylee: Aww...thanks...I have a weird thing about describing something repeatedly in the beginning (I

Re-review... When I woke up in the morning, I thought it was just another ordinary day. You know, wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, get picked on all day, ...

I want to get 150 reviews, 75 more, by July 1 for a fourth star!

Hey, ashleylee! What a perfect day! Sunlight streams from the sky and warms me to the bone. I feel the warmth all the way down to my toes. Nothing can ...

Kareena swished her long, violent purple hair out of her eyes and pulled down the curtains in her room. She squinted as the blinding sun beat down on her as ...