Periwinkle

Hello! :D I'm going to review your story. I liked this story - a cute explanation for an eclipse. Aww...I'm not too keen on astronomy but they only get to ...

Most of your technical difficulties have been pointed out, but I have to say I still don't understand the story. I feel for the character, but I have no clue ...

I agree. I can't stand the others --- I can only watch SVU. I love Olivia she's so endearing. But yeah I think it's going to last forever. People love ...

I would suggest Ingrid Michaelson, Kate Nash, and Feist. Or go on and look up Regina Spektor and look at her related artists. I like all of these. Regina is ...

9/10 I think Gir is cute. =D

I like this story, though I think you could use more imagery. Is the cell dank? Is it cramped? Is it smelly? What does it remind her of and how ...

This seems silly but how do you write stuff under your username?

I have to go with an M-name. I agree with the person that said Molly. I love that name and it seems to fit your character but now when I ...

I think you did really well writing from the animal point of view and pulled off the choppy style. It makes the cat so much more relatable...it's almost like being ...

Gee...I liked this story. It's one of those light, bubbly stories I love to read. =D I just wanted to know about a few things and correct a few things: ...

Hello, I read your story and I found three main things wrong with it. You need to flesh out your character's more, flesh out a plot, and fix up some ...

Hello, I thought sense we were friends I should review your work. I have to agree with the others--- if your going to remain with Greek Mythology try to stay ...

I'm the first reviewer! Yay? Anyways...I liked your story but it's a bit rough. You change POV and tense a couple of times and you do a lot of telling ...

I'm leaning towards three. Number one sounds like a roleplay doesn't sound like a plot to me. Then I also like the second one, but I don't think there's enough ...

Hello, I'm new here, too. I like indie and alternative the most, too. I'm not so much into rock more into acoustic. So welcome, that's not a lot coming from ...