Periwinkle

I. NITPICKS Guilt gnaws inside of me, but I hold it at bay. Guilt from stopping a girl from certain torture had she taken the lad. The thoughts of Vinnie ...

I don't see a problem, actually. I mean..he's legally blind? So what. He can read and communicate obviously. His disability shouldn't prevent him from doing his job in any sort ...

I stepped out of my log cabin with my knapsack slung from my shoulder. I took in a deep breath. The mountain's cool, fresh air rushed through my nose and ...

I think it's beautiful, yes, and the angle is nice, but it's just a picture. A pretty picture. It doesn't, I don't know, pop out? It doesn't show anything new, ...

I heard my father’s voice before he emerged from the bedroom. Going to Chris’ house was looking like heaven right about then. This doesn't sound right. You should change the ...

Hello! I'm going to review your work today. The first thing I noticed is the way you spelled "Eboney" I don't know if that's intentional, but it's traditionally spelled "Ebony." ...

I could use more opinions on "The Monster" before I officially decide how I'm going to edit it: Thanks a lot if you do!

7/10...I feel really dumb but err...I don't get it..?

Unfortunately, time reversed to the beginning of time.

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I think it was Romeo's fault for being so over-dramatic and such a flip-floppy person. I mean first he "loves" Rosalie and then he sees this girl at a party ...

Standing upright; hands extended upwards, presenting her leafy blessing to the heavens. Hm...I'm not really so nice in the grammar department but I believe your semi-colon would best be a ...

Hmm...the only thing I noticed is "especially since Daniel is gone" we know the pain is coming from that fact so you should just take it out... You had a ...

I don't think you meant to make this board?

Senorita.