Periablo

Haha! That's great! I love it, I really do. It's such a good way to introduce a reader to your world, while not sounding "tell-y" or whatever we call it. ...

Alright, so I'm not positive on how to review a monologue, but here are my comments: First I got a couple of weird grammar or spelling things or whatever. To ...

I don't have much to say besides that that was genuinely amazing and it made me feel really good inside. You are a great writer and I have to thank ...

"I want to wake up from this nightmare, but it doesn't work that way I'm afraid." in the very beginning should have a comma in between "way" and "I'm", i'm ...

That was pretty great. You made me care for the guy by mentioning his daughter and then you made me really angry by having him get shot and then with ...

I personally liked it. I mean, yeah it wasn't "proper writing technique" but many amazing authors can write away from the norm. The dialogue was written wrong, kind of like ...

An author that is really good at ending each chapter in a cliffhanger is Christopher Wooding, notably in his The Braided Path Trilogy . Of course, he has to make ...

I haven't reviewed poetry before, and I'm not really a poetry kind of person. But what I found from reading that interested me, I liked your poem. The first time ...

This story is just the beginning, but I hope somebody can enjoy reading it as I enjoyed writing it. I know it gets a little sketchy in places, but I ...

I just read chapters one and two and I think this is really an amazing story so far. Your a great author and I look forward to the next chapters. ...

Hey everybody, I'm new here and I'm looking forward to reviewing some pieces and submitting some of my own. I usually write sci-fi stories and I'm good at introductions, capturing ...