Periablo

Not a bad poem. Only one problem: God doesn't exist.

The man in the torn, ragged clothes walked into the Kmart. He idled his way over to the arts and crafts section, the strips of fabric from his pants dragging ...

Pretty cool. I liked it quite a bit, it was more original than most runaway stories I read. There were a few weird things about it though. Like, the cut ...

I thought that that was pretty sweet. I liked the whole "cloud 9" "cloud you" thing. It was totally an original poem, and that's what made it so awesome. To ...

Well guys, this is my first real attempt at fiction. Please, tear it apart. Sorry it's so long, but I didn't think it would be smart to split it up. ...

I liked it. It was pretty heartwarming, I gotta say. And I really loved a few lines, like the one about her dinner plate sized eyes, and "Sadness. Like when ...

Really good poem, seriously. I don't really have much to say about it that hasn't been said but I just wanted to tell you that I really liked the line: ...

Man, that was fuckin' great. I love that ending, seriously. I expected some kind of "I love you" thing, and instead I got that. It was amazing. Besides that, the ...

That's a pretty sweet looking ship. The design is original and everything, very nice. I can't wait to see the end result, it looks really great so far. I kind ...

Oh my god thank you all so much for the comments. This is the first thing I've really posted in a long time and I was kind of worried about ...

Something I thought about during a 4th of July parade. It's a little over dramatic, though. Each float, each vestige in the parade of patriotism, is powered by a motive ...

Man, I thought that the grump was amazing. You did a great job at capturing his eyes and that's just awesome. And he just looks so wrinkly and well-drawn, that's ...

Cool poem. All I have to say to fix it up is that in the middle you say "And we can face to world today" and I think you meant ...

Haha, awesome. Great use of imagery and such, it sounded really good and you compared a secret to some cool things. So my one thing is that it sounded weird ...

I really liked it :D. The first stanza had great imagery and it fit well. I agree with that person above though, the dreamer with the sting is weird. Something ...