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If you want cliches, look at Meg Cabot. Uhm, "Princess Diaries" on Merlin and Ecstasy?

At first it was a bit confusing, what with all the typos, but I think you should've worked on it a bit more to give us more to work with ...

Banned for not knowing what the word "palindrome" meant.

"Sighed". Like, as in, "It's so hot in here", she sighed. It could be overrused. Sometimes I overruse it. XD

Banned for living in a country that is also dubbed "if youget my drift..."

Names : -Alice -Paul -Seb [short for Sebastian] -Ryan -Amelie -Slevin -Mason -Aja -Angie [short for Angela]

But lately I've been seeing how much I phail at writing compared to the other fantastic works I read and it's really been discouraging me. Read some books on writing. ...

Banned for being a noobie.

new picture. yes. it's photoshop. oh, can't you tell? XD

Okay, so here's a great song from the credits: "The Call", by Regina Spektor. You can look it up on IMEEN under "prince caspian", and I think you should find ...

Thank you all for the feedback! I really appreciate it. :] -loves- And yes, I know the voice is a bit mature. I mean, the narrative. But at first I ...

New Year’s Day I thought I was strong enough. We all think we’re strong enough, after the first breakup, the first job rejection, the first marriage, the first divorce. It ...

To my opinion, your editing should take about 3/4 of the time it took for you to write your novel? That's a pretty interesting estimate. You should put as much ...

4 stars out of 5. You did pretty well concerning composition. At first I was worried that you were doing paragraph/line/paragraph/line, and not linking them all together, but you did ...

Ditto Suzanne. It seems more like one of those Time articles, like what they're doing before they meet with George Clooney or something. It seems too casual for an essay. ...