PerforatedxHearts

And the Bride Wore Black “What a scandal,” they’d whisper on the streets. The priest who performed at his funeral, the weeping mother of the unlucky boy, murmurs of the ...

Setting the Scene All right, so what do you get when you put an adolescent and a bunch of shiny guns together? You pretty much get a spy. A teenage ...

"Unlike some young writers here I am not perfect?" Hm. Well, really, if you've had work that's been published in a newspaper, or any sorts of writing at all, then ...

Personally, I'm usually annoyed with little chapters. I mean, if you're going to make a big deal about starting a new chapter on a clean page, might as well make ...

Yeaah....But I feel a bit spoiled if I don't kill my character off. Like, I'm trying too hard to hang onto them. I had to kill off a character in ...

Uglies was a good book. So was Pretties, and Specials. But I was disappointed at the overall ending of the trilogy. It could've been resolved more and better.

For me? Hmm. I used to get on this site sponsored by HarperCollins called "HarperCollins Fan Lit". God, those writers were awful. The most decent one that I saw in ...

Meep. I like your name, too. Hehe. You can also ask for help from me, too. If you want, that is. Uh oh. I sense another maple-story player...O.O

Alright. I have an announcement: It's not a story that you're critiquing. It's the outline of a story that I'm making. Claudette just informed me about this. I thought that ...

Profile: Name: Rayku Age: 21 Gender: male he can: control people's emotions. For instance, Rayku can make a person happy when they're sad. likewise, he can make a person angry ...

Alright. I'll edit it to make some more info. Sorry. I was in a rush, and I didn't have time. Neither do I have it right now, but I'm alright. ...

Hmm...I have to listen to track 8, then. Curious. I love using a few songs in my stories. Liz Phair's song, the one that starts with "get a load of ...

Ooohhh. I get it. See? Two sides to a song. I get it. I like it. :D

I need a plot critic, simply put. PM me if you're interested. More info later. [EDIT] Alright. The genre is fantasy/paranormal/romance/a bit of adventure and action. You can see it ...

I use a pseudonym. People know me by Saylen Viktorya, Keiran Kendall, Mina Valentina, or Serena Valentina. Ya'll know me by Serena Valentina. I use the pseudonym since it sounds ...