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Yay! Thanks, JC, for the review! :D Heehee. I also have another short story written up. I'm doing anything and everything I can to avoid working on my more long-term ...

Mweheee! Yay! *Claps hands* I'm happy. Alright, JC. (By the way, I'll probably end up PM-ing this to you if you don't see this anyways. Heehee) I'm confused about how ...

Hehe. Trust me, Writing Competitions are not that scary, no matter what you think. Hey, at least you know you tried. Just submit like crazy and take a good look ...

And the Bride Wore Black is a short story. Heehee. Thanks! See ya' around too.

Hehe. I agree. So far, I've changed the highschool thing plus changed pt.2 to first person on paper. Tomorrow, I'm going to start building up mroe info. it's just that ...

So, I've been working so hard on And the Bride Wore Black . I hope it's ready. I have such high expectations for this story. Anyways, I've been thinking about ...

Yay! *Dance* Wow. How exciting. I'm surrounded by people who really want to publish their book, and some are actually going to get the chance to do so. Really, don't ...

Hmm... I think it can go either way. I mean, it can be meant to be plural (as in, "writer's" is plural), which should be "Writers'", or it can be ...

Hey, I'm Serena. You've probably seen me hanging out most at the Writing Tips section, or constantly checking up on my story over at the Literary Community (In the Romantic ...

So, what do ya'll think about it? I hope ya'll got the twist.

And now, the LAST PART. PART TWO *&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&* “I’m so sorry for your loss.” “I wish I could’ve done something more to help.” “He was a good man.” Sober, grim ...

Wow. That must be hard, Meep. Although I can see your point there, since sometimes it just takes time, Starbucks, and watching movies to understand your character. Shrug. At least, ...

No problem. Yeah, there were the main questions that actually helped build up your character.

Ohmegahhh. *Dies of happiness* I swear, I'm about to faint from all this good feedback. I was hoping the best for this story, and it looks like I got it. ...

Allright. Let me explain a fewthings. Do you remember the part where she says something like, "I knew the heartbreaking line of, “Let’s just be friends.” Yeaah. Well, even though ...