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Dang. That's pretty hard. I've been writing for, I guess, as long as I've lived. Or, at least, when I started to write. Since when I was 3 or 4 ...

Yes, the Bible is awesome. Better than any other plot twists in the world, I guess. And it's a 67-book series!! Gasp. XD I think it's 67.

As far as the romance goes (and i have never read the story you based it on), it seems like a classic romantic evening. But...I don't know, I guess it's ...

This is adorable, even if I haven't read the other chapters. But the "problem" with this story is that, and I'll ignore all grammar mistakes, it needs something more catchy ...

I read this tip in Writer's Digest, and coincidentally it matches your problem. I'd say that when it becomes a huge ugly pimple on your face of life, and you're ...

Yes, please check the grammar. But what I liked about this was that as the story "intensified" towards the middle, becoming more "pretty" and lyrical. The problem is that your ...

Okay. XD That would actually be pretty funny. The funky helmets and huge staffs and everything. But no. Umm..Basically there are 9 girl muses, okay? And I was thinking that ...

Every Slash Counts Scars of you reduced to ribbons Touch the pain Put a bandaid where it hurts the most. She tries to cry. He takes the tears. Touch the ...

Aww. Just don't massacre me. I'M ONE OF Y'ALL!! *bigsmile*.

What do you think about using certain stories in a story? Popular ones include the Tam Lin one, where the girl has to hang onto her 'boyfriend" so he won't ...

Just look at the masthead of any magazine. Some people, like me, want perfect names. You know, like the movie star-potential surnames. But not everyone is perfect, and neither are ...

Ooh. Hm. But still. It just pisses me off, it's like they think that since they're 13 years old they get special attention, or since they're younger than a lot ...

Bahah. I try, I try. But sometimes my 13-year-old-big-mouth gets away with me too. All my fellow friends in English class at my school were afraid to let me critique ...

I bet someone's already said this before, but we all are our own worst critics. Some people are just a little harder on themselves than others. I'm just as insecure ...

I agree with extrastapled, and if you want to get "serious" about this sort of genre, then don't be ashamed of the sex scene. And besides building up too fast, ...