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Weather, I think, is only important if it plays a vital part in the story mood, or impacts the characters in some way, or has to do directly with the ...

Pshh. Snoink as a pink flamingo. We can ALL imagine that. The first hogamingo.

Mm...4th paragraph, Nancy Davis one. You've got 3 consecutive sentences starting with "and". It's okay for 2 sentences, but 3 just sounds lame. And the sentences are too short, too ...

For one thing, you've got numerous grammatical, spelling, and sentence structure mistakes. Run this through Word again, and read this ALL out loud to yourself, mkie? For now, change the ...

It's not against the law, but I think they had something on if you're writing, say, a memoir and you use that specific person's name, first and surname, and you ...

MiwaKi is now my personal therapist/psychologist/advisor. I love you. :]] I think the same can go for guilt. Guilt is not the feeling of remorse for a wrongdoing, but it's ...

Ditto. And, please, learn how to spell "controversy" correctly first. It's quite irking.

Thank you so much! :]

I'm not so sure if the problem's about whether you should use controversy in your story or not, though Amelia is right- don't focus purely on controversy. I think it's ...

In The Shadows It had been a battle gone terribly wrong, and winter’s reluctant loitering knew that as much as Artemis Mogue. He stood, feet solidly apart, hands clasped behind ...

You don't even need to write anything about the story. Just write everyday, and write it differently everyday. Your mind will get you the ending or whatever when it's ready, ...

Aww. thank you? don't worry, making people cringe is my dedicated profession.

Tamora Pierce's books are aimed very, very largely at the female audience, yet my brother reads them. The Empress's blah blah blah, can't remember the book name, [Ohhh. the Empress's ...

[I think I've commented on this already, not sure. XD] In my opinion, it doesn't matter how young you started writing, it matters how much you've improved since you started ...

For some reason, this sounds like a Chicken Soup for the Soul story. Which means it's not particularly good. Okay, so if you're going for the real-life look, then you ...