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Stars, see them high. And you. Get high. Off of them. It's awkward, how "high" is repetitive. Very interesting...very abstract, in a way. I couldn't really keep up with you, ...

CITYOFBONES!!! Sigh. That was a totally hot book. I dig the main guy, forgot his name since I read the book a long time ago. But I really can't wait ...

Ditto everyone. This sounds more like a Chicken Soup for the Lover's Soul, or whatever. Make it sound like an actual story , not a come-and-go thing. That's what I ...

Oh, and by the way? You don't need to bold the font. It's got enough to stand on its own, darling. ;) --seree.

You consistently spell "comets" wrong. Only one "m". Um, I sort of like this. Maybe it lost its appeal, at least for me because I just watched a Shakira video. ...

Congrats, everyone! :]

I love this story, LOVE the hot art guy, absolutely fell in love with the emotions, but I think you cut it off way too fast. She's on the bus, ...

Ditto Gryphon. It strikes the reader very fast, but it also ends too fast as well. You only divulge to the reader that he does make some moves, but you ...

What I especially loved was the emotion. And I absolutely LOVED the beginning on this, very catchy and simply mainstream-contemporary fiction-wonderful. :] If you know what I mean. Try to ...

THE SWEET FAR THING!!!! LOVEITLOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!!! Okay. Sorry. It's just everything I hear that I have an urge to freak out. It was an awesome book. I read it in one ...

All of the above, and circumstance. [for both the killing and the romance].

I second Queen of Dolls!

Sam, As a Christian [Baptist], the two main things our religion is based off of is pretty much three things: God [and the Holy Trinity, etc.], the Bible, and faith. ...

Exactly. First, try to journal a bit each day before you write. Just getting your general feelings on paper without the pressure of actually accomplishing a story or however many ...

Yes, definitely an agent. Preferably one that's part of the national writing group, I forgot their name, but that particular group has agents governed by a rule, that they cannot ...