Pentavalence

Hey SilloriaD, Thanks so much for your kind review! The fire scene definitely needs work, you're right. I think it's pretty similar to the Titanic though, but just in case ...

Hi Maya, Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work! Everyone who reads this piece seems to agree that the fire scene needs work, and I ...

Thank you so much! You are an amazing person and made even more amazing for taking the time to review my work. I will fix the spelling/grammar issues and tweak ...

Aww, thank you! Glad you liked it.

Thanks @BlueAfrica! This is a fantastic review. I want to fix everything you mentioned, but there's not enough time before the deadline (because I'm a lazy procrastinator XD), but I ...

Nik, Thank you for your great review! Unfortunately, I don't have time to fix everything as my computer's about to die, but I look forward to editing it in the ...

Np :)

No problem!

OK, so the dialogue: "Join the club," is a more modern, 21st century phrase, and (I'll just copy and paste here) %u201CI leave room for the possibility a new company ...

No problem, glad to help :)

Thanks for the review Mem! Could you tell this was my first real attempt at writing a novel? I have a lot to work on XD Your feedback was very ...

Hey Ten! I really appreciate the feedback you've given. You're right, the acting manager is pretty Disney cartoon villain-esque. I'll definitely give him some more backstory. And the beginning of ...

*Note from the author* The characters are initialed because I haven't decided on names for them yet, and the word (Saint) is in parenthesis for the same reason. Please don't ...