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  • Writing Tips Re: Making a Character Death Sad

    With as many death scenes as I've read and written, I find that describing another character's pain along with describing the death, like so... Sarah fell to the floor as ...

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: How do YOU get last names for a story charater?

    I find that I have to know my chracter before I know my character's last name. Some characters don't need last names, so make sure you know your character before ...

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Writers Corner Re: The Chronicles of Secrecy- The Writing

    These are general layouts for the novels, kind of like what they put on the backs of books.. The titles are still working titles (except for the first). Book 1: ...

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Movies You've Gone to the Theater to See Recently

    I saw these movies... Harry Potter 5: David Yates is one of the better directors. I know a lot of things were cut, but that had to happen. The movie ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: Script Frenzy

    I finished with 20,438 words! This was a great chance to meet other writers and it's how I ended up on these forums! Yay Screnzy!

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Elder's Secret (Removed)

    The descriptions and character development is wonderful, not to mention your brilliant plot set up. I have one thing that wasn't too clear, why was Colin's mother so mean? Was ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Iriad

    This passage was exquisite, I could see the story in my mind. Wonderful descriptions, but there was one thing that I didn't get. Was he an angel or was he ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Keys To The Kingdom

    I'm looking for Lady Friday and it's driving me nuts. I have to find out what happens to Arthur, of course then I'll have to wait for Superior Saturday (Book ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: His Dark Materials.

    I saw the movie previews for The Golden Compass and knew that I had to read these books. I've been looking for copies and am about to go to a ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer

    Yes, I'm a guy and I love this book! Granted, I'm a bit different, but this book just defies all writing! This is one of the best books I've ever ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi everyone

    I also just signed on. Just popping in to say hey to everyone. I can't wait to get writing!

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Signing On!

    Hey, I'm sooooo excited to be on here! I've found another great group of writers! I found out about YWS from some teens on Script Frenzy. I look forward to ...

    Aug 5, 2007


It takes me deciding to write on YWS in the late hours...to realize how many members are most active while I'm unconscious
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