PenNPaper

Thanks for the review Jabber! :D Yes, you pointed out my weakness, I don't know how to describe. I'll try to edit this, hope it turns out better.

Hi guys, its me, PenNPaper. Recently I thought of doing a story with different parts in it. Im going to share the first part with you, see if its ok, ...

Good story, keep it up, although I couldnt understand two things. 'I feel for Mr Kyoski', do you feel bad or sad? You said that girls classify Aaron as 'Perfect', ...

Hope you like this, it's my first attempt at writing a short fantasy story. This is the edited version The day just before my 15th birthday, my mentor for magic, ...

It's a good story, it kept me in suspense till the very end, i was glad you didn't reveal her power, it would have made the story less interesting. To ...

That was nice! At first I thought that the guy JuJu was going to take you to someplace nice or something. And then suddenly it turns out to be a ...

The story was great. Personally, I don't like to read Cinderella, but after i read your story, it seemed like you had turned it into an interesting read. Just one ...

My favourite genre to read are mystery and adventure books, i like books that give the reader a suspense. i like to write about adventure too, i may try writing ...

I was looking for a club for young writers on the internet and i found this. ive just started out but this place looks really great.

Hi everyone, im new here. im currently 13 and i am a Singaporean. i love writing, it has always been my hobby. one day i aspire to be a writer ...