PenNPaper

Hi Evi wondering if you could review this for me. It's called Saving Zanica and it's under Science-fiction.

Voted. I like the badges.

Hi, PenNPaper here. Interesting, i was hooked on i must admit. The whole global warming thing, it sounded boring at first, but then it became exciting. Also you spelled holes ...

HI Shina, wondering if you could review this piece of work for me. It's called Saving Zanica, it's under Science Fiction and it's rated E

Thanks for the review lavabubblingout. :D I may have forgotten to mention that Michael was also a senior mechanic though.

If you can review this for me it would be a great help.

Interesting, I was hooked on till the last word. You managed to keep the story flowing smoothly without using much dialogue. Your words were also very descriptive I spotted this ...

Hi, it's me PenNPaper. I would like to say that I really like this, your story kept me in suspense. There may be a few grammatical errors but you should ...

Hi guys, it's me PenNPaper. This is part of the stroy I'm currently writing, I plan to publish it if I can. This is just the first draft, so it ...

Hey skl02134 , PenNPaper here. I think your story is off to a great start. it's very realistic and interesting too. I don't quite get you when you say a ...

Hi, its PenNPaper. So you seriously dreamt about this? Overall I think this is a good read, if you do post out the next chapter I will try to review ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper. Firstly, I would like to say that this part of your whole story was well done, I was stuck to it till the very end. Secondly, your ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. My name's PenNPaper, but you can call me Pen or PnP. I see Eris has already informed you of the rules. 14? That's cool, I'm 14 ...

Hi, mage_banks, PenNPaper here. Nice job, although I would have liked to see more. Also steeped should be changed to stepped . Other than that it was a good story, ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. This was an interesting read, although there were a few minor errors though. I couldn't figure one thing, is the Sea Bait the MC's name, or title? ...