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Re: Welcome to the Funhouse, Faxness (Maximum Ride)
Hi! I read Maximum Ride a few years ago, they were pretty good. I think you kind of missed her sarcasm in places, although it's hard to put sarcasm and ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Breaking Rules
It was great and rich in deatil. Your writing is very flowing and easy to keep reading. Once I started, I didn't stop. But also, it was missing a focused ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Hi I'm Peach!!!!
Hi Jessa! I like to write practically anything, whatever comes to mind. I usually don't write poetry because I feel there's to many poems, and they're often short. Sure, I ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Hi I'm Peach!!!!
Thanks Tabby. I'm finally calming down from my banana bread rush. :)
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: One Word Story Ring
The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Blabber On
Why do people want to rule the world? So much paperwork!
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The storm
I agree with Tamara, it was a little hard to read because of the long line's and no spacing, but it was great, regardless of what it looked like :) ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: My Terrifying Experince
hi! this is my first review, sorry if it's horrible! :) Great descriptions at the beginning, but I have a few comments. Falling leaves were scattered all over the muddy ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Hi I'm Peach!!!!
Hi! I'm Peach. This is my first writer's site. I'm not the best writer in my school, but I love writing! Sadly I can't seem to get past 50 page ...
Apr 25, 2011
