Peach

Hi, there's both really good. They look sketchy, in the sketch/drawing way. It's cool! Anyways, I think the eyes are what makes the person look girly. Their to soft and ...

Lies, secrets, gossip. Are these the words you connect with friendship? Whispered lies behind my back. Corrupt words off two Evil tongues. Could she really care about me? Two sneaky ...

Hi! It's so great to have new people here at YWS. IT doesn't matter if you're not good, you'll get better with helpful comments on your works. What so you ...

I think it's Ok to date young. It makes you who you are. Some of us may have broken hearts, or our first kisss wen we're 12, but that's us. ...

Wow, this was really good! I couldn't stop reading, I just wanted to see what horrible thing Miranda did next! your MC is pretty good and believeable, but Miranda is ...

They meet in a small, sunny café above the metro station. The city moving about them. it should be a comma, the second sentence sounds awkward alone. the one , ...

Well, i'm sorry about whatever happened with your friend, but a great poem came out of it!! I didn't see any grammar problems yay! I loved it! It had a ...

When you ask someone out to a dance or on a date, doesn't it make sense that you actually *talk* to this person? But no... In fact, the "couples" at ...

This sounds so cool funky! I'd like to be Peach, or maybe a peach. . . no, Peach, from Mario. Pose me however! You should post it when you're done!

Rough Draft ( very rough, be harsh) Silent tears fell from my eyes, dripping down onto my shiny new black shoes. I focused on a worm sliding into the dirt ...

thanks you two!

Why does YWS stop every morning around 8:30? It's happened twice to me, is it just my computer?

I chose Ren. Sunshine's to plain, and Rhode's like Road, so I like Ren. Why do so many people think it sounds like hen? Do people think Anne Sounds like ...

Despicable me, haven't seen it yet. :) Would you rather be a famous artist or musician?

9/10 Dogs are cute!!!!! they cute me too lol I penciled my paper.