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I am... what is that word ...speechless? That story drew me in right from the beginning! I was disappionted when it ended! That made Roan more nervous and scared and ...

Hi Off tune!!!! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here! PM me if you have any questions!!!! by the way, don't chat speak!!!! Paw

I liked it. It made me drift into the Fairy world. I don't totally agree with Gordon. Repetition sometimes sounds good in poetry and I think it did flow in ...

*CLaps happily to be the first one to greet you* :) Hi! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here and I cannot wait till you start posting! If ...

This was very confusing, in a really good way. It is meant to be that way, a confusing poem! I really liked how you used the repition, making it have ...

Critiquing a poem it very hard for me because it is different from writing a fully written sentences with good grammer, punctuation and all that. WHen you write a poem, ...

This is kind of hard to critique since it is so short... SO I think I will just wait until you finish this fully. Let me know when you do ...

It looks like you have a great plot going on here! This was really good! I loved it! I didn't spot any spelling or gramatical errors. I cannot wait for ...

I thought it was really good even though it was kind of confusing. In the begining it was a little rough. I think you can combine some of the sentences ...

This was really good! It drew me in! I loved the description you used in this poem! Nice job! Paw

I loved it! This was perfectly written. The way you write your characters is very good. My favorite part was when the cloth was removed to reveal a paper crown! ...

I haven't written for a while so I'm a little rusty. Changed the whole thing if necessary! XD __________________________________________________ I rubbed my eyes, still half-asleep from the long car r

*did not finish*

Chapter 3 Lena stared at the girl openmouthed. The girl herself did not look so suprised, instead she wore a smile; Lena's smile. "W-who are y-you," Lena stuttered, blinking rapidly. ...

Chapter 2 Lena opened her eyes slowly and found herself staring at her carpeted floor. With a suprised yelp she fell to floor. "Ow," Lena groaned, rubbing her head. She ...