PaulClover

Wow :) You really are dedicated! If you could, I would really appreciate any and all reviews for my novella-in-progress, "In Memoriam." I recently finished Part 3, but any new ...

Pine Springs Summer Camp had seen better days. I know what you're thinking. Oh, silly Death! The whole world's seen better days. And you would be right. But Pine Springs ...

I really liked this! As a sufferer of insomnia, I can attest to everything that happened! Shotguns indeed! LOL just kidding :) I totally dug how it was put together, ...

Memory is, if nothing else, the only true bridge between the living and the dead. Greater than monuments, stronger than ideas, and more tangible than words printed on paper can ...

I tip my hat to you, sir! This is, to me, the best chapter thus far! The amnesty between Lavern and Myra is very well handled, and it reflects how ...

This is a really neat story, and I'm interested to see where it goes. It feels kind of like a political thriller except in a fantastical setting. It's really awesome ...

This is shaping up to be one of the coolest stories I've ever read, period. The entire narrative oozes a dreamlike, almost eerie quality. I almost want to wait until ...

It was a chilly evening in late November, and Little Craig was on his way home. Upon seeing Little Craig, most people would remark (not out loud, of course) that ...

I agree with what Dante said :) This poem is very fractured, in a way, and that's what gives it beauty. Also, incredibly big words. Not sure what some of ...

I really liked this poem :) Your use of language is incredibly well-developed, in my opinion. The only thing that gets me is the hey-hey-hey part. It sounds more like ...

You have no reason to not be proud of this poem. It's actually quite good. I'm not much of a poetry buff, but I really did enjoy this Two thumbs ...

I really liked this. Your style is quite good and effective :) A little on the short side though, but it works well here and gets right to the point. ...

This was a really neat story, and I liked how you emphasized how horrible and damned the protagonist was. To hell with likable people :) It was almost like a ...

This is a really neat start to what I expect will be an incredible story. I liked the vagueness of the surroundings and characters, though I do hope that you ...

Great, now I'm sad. And I mean that in the best possible way. This story was incredibly well-written. It honestly felt like it was told from the point of view ...