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Re: In Memoriam - Part V: Ashes, Ashes
You know what's funny? I wasn't sure. To put things in perspective, let's say that I've had a lot of customers. I can claim seniority over Australia, the Earth, and ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Nobles and Beggars: Chapter 3 *Parts 1-2*
This just keeps getting better and better :) sorry it took me so long to get to chapter three, BTW! This is probably the funnest, most readable story I've read ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam - Part IV: Sins Past
Thanks for the reviews :) Helpful and encouraging as ever! For those who care to know, I'm not EXACTLY sure how many installments are left. I have it outlined and ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: The Cave Between Lands, Chapter Four
It's great to read "Cave" again; for a moment there, I was afraid you'd decided to abandon it. Nothing to really nitpick at. As per usual, your composition is well-written ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam - Part IV: Sins Past
Everything dies. And I mean everything . Trust me; I'm generally accepted to be the expert on the subject. But don't take my word for it. Look at the facts. ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Watch It Burn
I am by no means a poet. I suck at it, quite frankly. Stanzas, rhythm, and rhyme are alien to me, so please forgive my lack of finesse. I wrote ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter Three
Clover here again! This was by far the most accessible of the chapters; and look, there's even some dialogue! :) Haha, I kid. Most of my criticisms have been put ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter Two
Here for chapter two! I don't really have much to say about this chapter in particular. The same criticisms apply (the lack of explanation/character development); as do the praises (everything ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter One
It's really refreshing to read something so experimental; then again, most of your work is more than a little outside the box, so I guess I should expect it at ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Beginning of 'The Inbetween'
This is a really good little snippet of story :) I really liked the dialogue between the two friends. Reminds me of actual girls at the high school I go ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Nobles and Beggars *Part 2*
I'm really digging on this story, bro! Excuse my hippie dialect, I'm feeling little spacey right now :) All in all, a really cool chapter to a really awesome novel-in-progress. ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Siren's Call
This was really well-written and neat. I especially like the way you obliterated the fourth wall at the end; don't think that's ever been done before, and it works well ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: The Fish and His Roommate
This is actually a story I wrote for English. Not my best work (not by a long shot!), but I just felt like posting something :) Hope you enjoy Once ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1
This is a really funny story and an incredibly neat concept :) I really like the idea of doing a man-hunts-dragon story from the point of view of the beast, ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: A Prayer of Understanding
WOW, this was really good and creepy. I've said a thousand times that poetry isn't really my thing, but this was pretty provoking. I like the savagery of it, I ...
Jan 25, 2011
