PaulClover

Paul here! You've been reviewing my (poorly edited and typo-ridden) stuff for so long, that I thought it was time that I returned the favor by reviewing (and definitely enjoying ...

Paul again :) Another cool chapter! Definitely feels more focused than the last, which is usually how it goes for novels-in-progress. Most of the time, it's not until chapter three ...

We manage to scrounge together a camp, lighting fires from the clothes of those we have buried. I stand away from the others, staring off into the abyss of the ...

This is really beautiful. Makes me want to drive over to my Grandma's house right now and give her a hug. People like Mimi are truly special, the kind of ...

Part one of my three-part sci-fi story Please & thank you :)

Part one of my sci-fi/horror short story Please be EXTREMELY brutally honest for this one!

Paul here! This is a cool little first chapter. Interested to see where it goes.,(or if it goes, depending on whether of not you decide to continue.) The most admirable ...

The Samaritan is burning. I shield my eyes from the flames, stumbling around through the blazing hallways of the ship. I can barely breathe, the smoke seeping into my lungs ...

Paul here! Welcome to YWS :) This is a really cool premise, like a mix of X-Men and The Walking Dead . The set-up is incredibly interesting and I applaud ...

I would like to give you an extremely belated welcome to YWS!:) I liked your story, how it offered a brief glimpse at the struggles of a splitting family. I ...

When I was one, my mom decided my middle name was going to be "Alexandria", despite the fact that I am male. When I was two, I learned to walk. ...

Really neat story. Definitely liked how it was a brief glimpse into the final moments of someone's life, and that the person just happened to be an astronaut. The voice ...

I don't understand humans. They eat, they sleep, they live, die. Every life is the same, give or take. You are born, you live, and you die. See? They're all ...

Easily the best part of this was the bedtime stories that the mother tells the daughter. Really fairytale-ish and strangely comforting :) The only REAL criticism I can make is ...

Only one more to go! I know I shouldn't have posted this during the Superbowl, but screw it, I'm grounded and all I have to my name is a laptop, ...