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Paul here! Haven't reviewed anything in a while, so forgive me if I'm a little rusty ;) Just wanted to say that this is awesome as always :D This prologue ...

God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and wisdom to always tell the difference. Kurt Vonnegut, Slaughterhouse-Five It ...

This is the greatest poem to ever be written ever. That is all.

I'm looking back at this story, and I realize that I was way too vague about the ending. I'm gonna go ahead and spell this one out. There are two ...

Paul here :) Ready to return the "review favor" or something like that First and foremost, I love the way you start this off. It sets a tone and creates ...

This was really good. A nice little introduction to what will surely be a fun (and hopefully finished ;)) story. I really like the dream. Not so much the description, ...

Paul here! Wow, nice story! Depressing, though :( Now I wish I had a puppy to hold. I guess the end of the world isn't always fun and games. In ...

Paul here! Sorry it took me so long to review! Number one, I definitely applaud you for working with another writer. This is probably the bets way to learn compromise ...

Thank you all SO MUCH for your kind words/critiques :D It really means a lot, especially since I've had a nasty case of writer's block as well as a surgery ...

This morning, I met Death at the side of the road as I was collecting yesterday's mail. He strode toward me, his black cloak swaying in the morning breeze. I ...

Amazing Paul here! Just listened to the song, and I must say you captured the feeling very well. Like the reviewers before me have said, your descriptions are marvelous, and ...

“I’m a comedian , ” said Juliet. “And I make a lot of money, and I make a lot of people laugh.” “Then why are you here?” a sked Dr ...

Paul here! Sorry for the delay! This is incredibly well-written, and file my response to this under "Not Surprised" :). As always, your imagery, grammar, spelling, etc. are fantastic, so ...

Wow...I had no idea. This is an incredible poem, very emotional and full of passion. It feels real in a way that few written things can, and I applaud not ...

Silently, like prisoners leaving their cells for the execution chamber, we leave our makeshift camp and head out into the endless desert. We follow the smoke rising above the horizon, ...