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Paul here! This was incredibly well-written. In the way of grammar, there's really nothing I can recommend other than changing the capitalization in the title to "The Sea" instead of ...

Paul here! Kafka, I do believe you have outdone yourself in the weird factor :) And yes, that is most certainly a compliment. The "Puppeteer" was disorienting, especially with the ...

This is a poem to my ex-girlfriend, whose name I have shortened to Dani D. Sorry for the poor/rushed quality, but I really needed to vent some emotions here. Feel ...

This is great! And what are those creepy little things whispering in her ear? Definitely cool, and a real nice piece of art :) I'm not really qualified to review ...

Caveat: This is a horror story, plain and simple. This story is not for the squeamish or the faint of heart. Anyone who is sensitive to such subjects as suicide ...

Two weeks passed without a second incident. Since Patty was too poor to afford repairs and Jack had never nailed a board in his life, the hole remained as is. ...

Author's Note: Back in 2007, I started a still-unfinished novel that was basically a collection of six interconnecting novellas. This is the first half of the first novella, and the ...

Paul here for review! This story is a lot like an apple pie. It's sweet (almost a little too sweet), warm and you feel a mixture of happiness and sadness ...

I have to agree with the review at the top, as it looks more like an Eleven-lookalike rather than Eleven himself. That said, this picture is bloody awesome. I love ...

Paul here! Oh, and (forgive my flamboyancy), but love, love, love! This is great! I've always had a thing for biblical mythology, especially concerning the Fall of Heaven and the ...

Paul here! My view is pretty much the same as everyone else's. I would introduce maybe three or four characters in this first chapter, but more than that and it ...

On Christmas Day, the world was spinning, and things were going more or less the way they always did. The stock market was bad, but the money continued to flow ...

This is the prologue to my novel-in-stagnant-progress, and I'm not sure whether it's necessary or even readable. It's really short and basically dialogue-free. Please proceed to rip it to shreds ...

Paul here! Usually when I review stories on this site, I'm too busy looking for errors and building up constructive criticisms to really enjoy the the narratives. This was different. ...

I'm really liking this story :) It reads kind of like a new fairy tale, which is pretty much what you were going for, so mission accomplished sir *salutes* The ...