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This is actually a sort of excerpt from my novel-in-progress, The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism , but don't let that scare you away. Rather than being a continuation of the ...

Decided to rewrite TGE, and this was the best prologue I could come up with. I know a lot of books begin with the in media res thing (even [sigh] ...

PREVIOUSLY: Dwight's in a cellar, about to get his throat slit by a punk kid named Alexander. Never mind that Alexander's dead body lays slumped right beside them; dead or ...

Paul here! but when she transferred into my class at the semester It should be "at the start of the semester." The way it is, it doesn't really make any ...

I went back and changed the opening line from "Approximately three hours" to "Approximately ten minutes." By the end of the chapter, the reason should be disturbingly obvious ;) . ...

Paul here! I finally decided to procrastinate doing schoolwork get back into the habit of doing some reviews! I really liked this piece. It felt poignant, and sad, honest somehow. ...

RECAP: After the death of his father, Dwight Markos and his mother move to a small town on the gulf of Alabama. It's not exactly clear why yet. Dwight doesn't ...

Paul here! Really digging the writing style here. I know this has been said over and over again in the comments, but "refreshing" is the first word that comes to ...

Not a lot of action here, but definitely building up to something BIG and totally AWESOME. I can't wait to share it, but right now my computer is lagging and ...

The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and all science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who ...

Paul here! (cue dramatic music) I really liked the writing here, which is good because they're really isn't that much in the way of plot besides building up the two ...

To her sisters, she was known as Raquel. Good, sweet Raquel from a faraway land up north where the grass was green and the weather fair. A girl from the ...

Paul here! This was a neat story, though I didn't love it as much as I liked it, if that makes any sense. I'll go ahead and get the critique ...

My story is about a freelance writer in a Martian canyon listening to evil jokes. "Sir, I was thinking – more like wondering, really – um, do you think it ...

Paul here! First off, I truly loved the story here. The idea of a dentist lured into a castle of vampires is hilariously ironic, and the generally playful tone helped ...