Pattycakes

Hey, Welcome to YWS! This might be a little briefer than I normally do but I'm tired so... First off, I liked this story quite a bit. The frame of ...

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Hey welcome! I know as a younger person this sort of comment is kind of annoying but this is pretty strong for someone who's thirteen. That might sound backhanded but ...

Alright, I always hate it when people review your first chapter and not your latest one. So I kinda did the opposite. To start out, the amount of writing you ...

Cool story, I normally don't go for things this, uh, emo. The characterization between the two sisters is really well done. When Cat knocks on the door you say Emily ...

Ye shall be as Gods, knowing good and evil. Ye shall be as Gods. Gods ye shall be as. As Gods ye shall be. Be shall Gods you as. No, ...

Short but pretty cool. I'll admit I'm not a huge fan of the opening sentence style that goes "______ was verb'ing'. But it picked up from there. Crouched down, leaning ...

First, I'd just like to say that this story is absolutely AMAZING and I can't believe no one has given you a review yet. But I think there's a simple ...

"She tried not to meet the registrar’s eyes, her back hunching over." -The registrar's job in the United Kingdom is a little different from the job of the same titled ...

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This one which is fantasy (but not elves and magic fantasy.) about a kid digging his way to a new world. Preferably the later chapters (3 and 4) where I ...

Hey if you could review chapter 3 or 4 (or both :) ) of this story: that'd be awesome. I'd prefer if you read the first two chapters, but you ...

Hey! I think the description in this story is really good, I like the way you describe the dance and the cancers physical descriptions and motions. You use a lot ...

Daniel left the cafe a little confused but in good spirits. After all, even if she was a little different, that was the longest any girl his age had ever ...